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petey, i love you man petey, i love you man, BUTT i have tried to NICELY say before that i really can not get all the way through one of your posts or comments. dude, you go on and on and on and on. in one sentance questions that are usually rhetorical, but not always. why is that? why do you ask a thousand questions without answering them? just because the answers are in your head, do you think that means that we all know what the heck you are thinking? and then you use bold and ital as if that somehow gives us the answers. no dude. it is just annoying and harder to read. like i said, i LOVE you and i WANT to read what you say....but i can NOT. my eyes start closing and my mind starts to wander. the bold and stuff makes it even hurt a little to read. i read other blogs no problem. even people i don't like or agree with. i ALWAYS had trouble getting through your blog posts in the past, and it has only gotten worse. dude, take a few courses in creative writing or english composition. or PREACHING. the style that you have developed here is NOT conducive to communication in ANY language. i have heard sermons that center around rhetorical questions that reall work. your stuff does NOT do that pete. you questions don't hold or work together to prove a bigger point. they are just seemingly random and senseless sometimes. i walk away confused more often than not. that is why i just answer you with cute or humourous answers. i have NO idea what you just said. i am not NAGGING you, like you nag me. i am telling you as your friend. the way you would want a friend to tell you need to use deodorant if you had B.O. i know you like to post here (10 times a day), and you have things you are trying to tell us. pete, the truth is that it is not at all clear, not at all easy to even understand what the wha you even talking about. effective communication is CRITICAL to spreading the gospel. pete, you REALLY need to work on your communication skills. i am telling this as your friend. one of your blog posts is pretty much just like the next to me. i can read the whole thing (which i usually do NOT, because it is painful and hard work and meaningless). i don't think it is me, like i said, i can understand other blogs jsut fine. even total defective brain cases like cookie monster and SOL are somehow able to compose lucid posts. not to brag, i am only to try to defend my claim that it isn't my issue. dude, i have 169 IQ and completed a graduate degree with a 3.85 GPA. i am not even a little challenged (thank you god). i mean, i have LOTS of other problems, no doubt, but my critical reading and analytical abilities are top of the pile. PLEASE look into obtaining some more useful english composition abilities. i almost NEVER have ANY idea what the heck you are writing about. it only comes off as nagging. asking rhetorical questions is a powerful composition tool, but not if that is the whole substance of your composition. petey, i love you man, but your writing lacks a LOT. 
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hey. i was just trying to be your friend man. if *i* had B.O. i would want someone to tell me. 
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*rim shot*
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i mean this in the nicest way possible, i LOVE meow. but his posts and comments are completely unreadable. listen to the others pete. your writing SUCKS big times. you are not getting your point across. you should consider a creative writing course. your writings MAKE NO SENSE AT ALL AND NOBODY CAN READ THEM ALL THE WAY THROUGH. you are wasting your time and ours. i love you man, i really want to know what you are trying to say. and i don't like hope agreeing with my anymore than she does
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