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forgive me sweet jesus i ain't going quietly when its time for me to die. i'll get all up in death's face and spit right in his eye. and i'll laugh and laugh when he says what's come to pass, i'll break his staff in half and shove that reaper up his asp. and i'll just run and hide in that land between death and life, i know my way around real good, i hang there all the time. i maybe haunt a couple of bars, just like i do now, and go hide in the welfare line, they don't see us anyhow. forgive me sweet jesus, and fork yourself satan, i can still get it up, hell, i'm still masturbatin' as long as there's one single thought in this head, that thought will be 'i will not be dead.' 
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god has many levels of expression 
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forgettable. me? i am this guy? do NOT be coming on my blog and be disrespecting me. hi freebird. yeah. chat is depressing
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you just don't appreciate good street poetry.
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10/2/2013 4:05 pm |
I really liked your stories that I left comments on yesterday. I really loved them. Do you do this poem for shock value? I actualy liked a couple of lines, or what they conveyed...like haunting the welfare line, they don't see us anyway...but dang! You apologised for puting the worst part on my blog, then post the whole thing. Guess I'll never understand you. You said you need to "fix" not knowing what is offensive to others, but I think you don't really care. David wrote a lot of poems, some more from his flesh than spirit, but sorry, you won't find anything close to this as a way God expresses Himself. I hope you take this as advice or loving correction from a sister and take it down. Think of baby christians or newcomers coming through here. How about another awesome story?   "Love is Patient..."
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this was an old street poem, and i don't do it anymore. i just ressurected it because the theme was about what your blog post was about, and i remembered it. however, i am NOT about baby christians. i am really about hardcore non-believers as well as believers with very tough skin. i don't believe in being fake nicey nice and not doing squat else for the kingdom. my LIFE is dedicated to god, and i don't have to worry about saying the right things. i just try to be real
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10/3/2013 8:34 pm |
I "get" the poem, but I just think it could be good without getting vulgar. But we're not going to agree. I wrote on your blog about Troll boy, how I liked that you care about the underpriviledged and the hurting. I hope God's Garage is being used of God and will continue to be. "Love is Patient..."
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sometimes i go for vulgar just for the cheap laugh, but this poem is probably the other way around. it draws in the bottom feeder mentality by its attitude, and yet is says something spiritual. i do a lot of stuff like that. the doctor doesn't come for the healthy. to serve the lost you have to get down there in it with them and be one of them, or you will spook them.
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