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10/13/2008 12:15 pm
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Hope you enjoy this, my latest poem...GB!

Avast! Solitary mind of disquieted maladies, sneer and poison with uncontendable melodies, the fanged dissonances of life which cut fast- whose flesh is solely his abode. That fiendish wretch lurking upon dim-knotted road, vexing thy earthly senses till eyes final close, wherefore the godless' fate becomes as a withered rose. For surely onto one second cannot the heathen hold, rather, into slavery is thy life by it sold. Lost despondent voices of the wilderness weep and wail-
Avail! Yield to the liquid substance of Holy Love's flow and hold steadfast to G-d's blessed sails As we journey beyond each days close with benighted petals of day gracefully plucked and lovingly pealed away when G-d's sun-ray melds into His iridescent moon-ray. Even unto Midnight hour remaining but G-d's rose, give thy crimson petals and nectared heart freely! Even unto earths stinging creatures and thief's hold fast! Child of G-d thy sweet harmony sticks upon all who pass!
GBY, sabrefire
Copyright © 10/11/2008
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586 posts 10/13/2008 1:28 pm |
your right, tissue is requried. can't stop coming back and rereading it.
your trully talented my brother! @)-
All things work for the good of those who Love the Lord, Jenn
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22248 posts 10/13/2008 2:09 pm |
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. Saying I am sorry is WORTHLESS without real repentance.
True or FALSE ?
Without a personal and intimate relationship with God, how can you ever realize the true identity and person of God?
Continue to be faithful, deliverance is near, obedience must be seen, be an unconditional blessing as He continues to bless you.
This time is short, serve Him well, serving all.
Without exception.
Know ?
Yes ?
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Meow?

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For me to live is Christ and to die is gain.
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869 posts 10/13/2008 5:33 pm |
Man, I really need to learn more English words. 
It's not extremely hard to understand, but I don't use these words in daily speech. Perhaps because English is not my native tongue. lol I still don't know what the poem is about. The first 4 lines were fine and then I got lost...
Ah well, perhaps next time I won't get so lost.
Let every thing that hath breath praise the LORD. Praise ye the LORD.(Psalm 150:6) 
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1551 posts 10/13/2008 6:08 pm |
Quoting honest352000: your right, tissue is requried. can't stop coming back and rereading it.
your trully talented my brother! @)-
Awww...thanks a lot! I'm very glad that you liked it. You come back as many times as you like!!!  GBY!
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1551 posts 10/13/2008 6:10 pm |
Quoting meow33744:
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. Saying I am sorry is WORTHLESS without real repentance.
True or FALSE ?
Without a personal and intimate relationship with God, how can you ever realize the true identity and person of God?
Continue to be faithful, deliverance is near, obedience must be seen, be an unconditional blessing as He continues to bless you.
This time is short, serve Him well, serving all.
Without exception.
Know ?
Yes ?
?
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Meow?

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Heyo Pete...
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1816 posts 10/13/2008 7:12 pm |
Ah, the ultimate battle of good versus evil. No Mr. Avast for me...as I will AVAIL myself of God's saving grace and steadfast love!
He is no fool if he should choose to lose the things he cannot keep to gain what he can never lose.....Jim Elliott
Deena 
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1551 posts 10/13/2008 7:58 pm |
Quoting floridagal2: Ah, the ultimate battle of good versus evil. No Mr. Avast for me...as I will AVAIL myself of God's saving grace and steadfast love!
Hey Smartcookie, thanks for reading and for getting it! I appreciate it dear sister! NO Mr. Avast for U! And let it be done!  GBY!!
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523 posts 10/13/2008 8:16 pm |
Hey sabre,
I can't wait for the day I walk into a "Barns & Nobles" to find a rather large crowd gathered around, scrambling to get their hands on the New York Times best seller "Reflections from the Midnight Ocean". So I can proudly say "I know that man"!!!
I trust you would have a signed copy for your buddy who hooked you up with the LIMO for the Prom. LOL
God Bless You Brother!!
Grace, like water, always flows downward, to the lowest place. Amazing Grace!!
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1551 posts 10/13/2008 9:22 pm |
Quoting gmarti: Hey sabre,
I can't wait for the day I walk into a "Barns & Nobles" to find a rather large crowd gathered around, scrambling to get their hands on the New York Times best seller "Reflections from the Midnight Ocean". So I can proudly say "I know that man"!!!
I trust you would have a signed copy for your buddy who hooked you up with the LIMO for the Prom. LOL
God Bless You Brother!!
Lol..thanks my good friend. You and I both will look forward to that day then! And yes of course my Good Sir; but I'll ship you a signed copy long before it makes it to the shelves of barnes and noble friend!  Hope you're stayin safe down there Brother! Continued strength and wisdom Sir! GBY!
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1254 posts 10/14/2008 11:57 am |
Thanks, Mike. I needed that, the avail part. Onward and upward.
Gina
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62 posts 10/14/2008 6:11 pm |
Oh Mike thats wonderful!
Even unto Midnight hour remaining but G-d's rose, give thy crimson petals and nectared heart freely!
And that right there is my favorite part You're so darned talented. . . .I wonder if you could write a poem for me? lol No, I could never wonder - I'm not worthy of your beautiful words! Keep up the writing!
God Bless! Tracey G.
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1551 posts 10/14/2008 6:35 pm |
Quoting thanksjesus: Thanks, Mike. I needed that, the avail part. Onward and upward.
Gina
Yes, the Avail route is definitely the path to take; straight and narrow!! Onward and upward... Thanks and GB!
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1551 posts 10/14/2008 7:10 pm |
Quoting GoblinQueen: Oh Mike thats wonderful!
Even unto Midnight hour remaining but G-d's rose, give thy crimson petals and nectared heart freely!
And that right there is my favorite part You're so darned talented. . . .I wonder if you could write a poem for me? lol No, I could never wonder - I'm not worthy of your beautiful words! Keep up the writing!
God Bless! Tracey G.
Hey thanks GQ, it took by far the most time to write that line, so good pick! It's great when something that you work the hardest on turns out for the best... There was a definite transition in tempo with that line and I left it that way because it worked I thought...
Even unto Midnight hour remaining but G-d's rose, give thy crimson petals and nectared heart freely!
Mt 5:8 "Blessed are the pure in heart for they shall see God."
Mt 12:35 "good man out of the good treasure of the heart bringeth forth good things: and an evil man out of the evil treasure bringeth forth evil things."
Luke 8:15 "But that on the good ground are they, which in an honest and good heart. having heard the word, keep it, and bring forth fruit with patience."
1 Peter 1:22 "Seeing ye have purified your souls in obeying the truth through the Spirit unto unfeigned love of the brethren, see that ye love one another with a pure heart fervently:
Hmmmm...could I write a poem for the Queen...hmmm...would I lose my head if I failed to enchant and captivate mi'lady? Lol... The question is...are my words worthy for her highness?!? 
You're so darned talented. Well thank you, but what talent I may have I pray that the Lord see's that I put it to an acceptable use! So...maybe I should write that poem for YOU!!! 
GBY Painted Child and thanks!!!
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