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So, here's two different...well, I think they're more songs then poems, maybe(?). Anyways, if you don't like one, then maybe you'll like the other... Thanks for reading anywayl; and GBY!  GIRL WITHOUT A NAME You came up, and I asked you your name, but you just winked... and then you walked away. But, I'm still here- and I'm stumbling, around now- lookin for a girl- without- a name. So these days I'm searching all around for just one more- glimpse- at you. I'm wishin so hard cuz my mind's in a knot, and she doesn't even know my name, But, tonite I'm gonna see you, I'll be flying in the deep blue, tonight I reserve my dreams for two I wish I could tell you, because it's true, I'm flying way up here for you. Nice to meet you! Have you heard that before? This time it's true, don't you know me? I'm your prince and here's my crown, I'm your jester and your clown, I'm who-ever... you want me to be, just like you wanted me to be, you silly beautiful darling... forget about the past, Tonight I'll know your name at last. Copyright © MAS 10/10/2008 And one more for good measure! OVER AND OVER 5am and I-96/ I'm flyin down the freeway way too fast/ puttin the past in the past/ stealin the sun's glory/ but darkness won't last/ path to her house / patience fading fast./ i'm playin crimson and clover/ over and over/ hours to go but it's finally the day/ together at last/ we'll put the past in the past/ and it can't happen too fast. Zoom zoom / burnin through a tank of gas/ cell phone rings/ bling bling/ news travels fast/ aint got long now/ beating traffic on the way /make it by evening I pray/ rain clouds hit the tip/ minutes still to go but finally the hour is here/ to embrace my most dear/ crimson and clover / playin over and over Highway 103 exit B/ brake for construction and make the connection/ butterflies start arrivin/ vroom vroom I keep on flying/ I missed her street/ go once around the block/ lump in my throat's like a rock/ time's up- future's- here and now the surreal hits me POW!/ walk to the door leave the past in the past/ can't believe I'm here at last/ put my ear to her door & I hear crimson and clover/ playin over and over! It sings "now I don't hardly know her,/ but I think I could love her,/ crimson and clover.../ she come's walking over,/ I'm waiting to show her, /crimson and clover,/ over and over,/ my girl's such a sweet thing,/ / what a beautiful feeling, / crimson and clover, / over and over." GBY, sabrefire Copyright © MAS 10/11/2008 |
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10/11/2008 7:18 pm |
Awwww....hope your nameless girl gets a name soon! He is no fool if he should choose to lose the things he cannot keep to gain what he can never lose.....Jim Elliott Deena 
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10/11/2008 8:05 pm |
Hey......you already know my name!!!!  Lisa In case you forgot!!! Very nice poetry!!!! I enjoyed reading them both!!!
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10/11/2008 8:43 pm |
Yes, very good read, keep it up! Seek ye first the kingdom of God, and His righteousness!
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10/11/2008 9:00 pm |
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. . . Saying I am sorry is WORTHLESS without real repentance. True or FALSE ? Without a personal and intimate relationship with God, how can you ever realize the true identity and person of God? Continue to be faithful, deliverance is near, obedience must be seen, be an unconditional blessing as He continues to bless you. This time is short, serve Him well, serving all. Without exception. Fleeing ? Know ? Yes ? ? .
Meow?  .
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10/11/2008 9:38 pm |
Wow bring out the tissue May you continue to walk in God Grace All things work for the good of those who Love the Lord, Jenn
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 10/11/2008 10:18 pm |
AAAAHHHH! You will make some lucky filly, a mighty sweet, gently passionate prince indeed!!!! Thank you for sharing your beautiful, intimate poems, that have such warmth, and allows us a glimpse into the soul of a real man! Blessings, My Dear!  Greater is He who is within me, than He who is within the world. 
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10/11/2008 10:45 pm |
You'll meet her soon Michael, you're young, plenty of time and no wrinkles looming Luv is patient, kind, unselfish, hopes 4 the best...
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10/12/2008 3:29 am |
Both were beautiful. I did like the Girl without a Name better.  You said they are more songs that poems. I think the Over and Over is more of a song. Have a great Sunday, sabrefire. Blessings. Let every thing that hath breath praise the LORD. Praise ye the LORD.(Psalm 150:6) 
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10/12/2008 6:18 am |
Mike those were amazing! I can't pick which one i like better; they were both great God will lead her to you, just have faith. GBY! Tracey
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10/12/2008 6:24 pm |
Awwww....hope your nameless girl gets a name soon! GBY!
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10/12/2008 6:27 pm |
Hey......you already know my name!!!! Lisa In case you forgot!!!Very nice poetry!!!! I enjoyed reading them both!!!  Thank you and GBY!
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10/12/2008 6:29 pm |
Yes, very good read, keep it up!
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10/12/2008 6:30 pm |
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. . . Saying I am sorry is WORTHLESS without real repentance. True or FALSE ? Without a personal and intimate relationship with God, how can you ever realize the true identity and person of God? Continue to be faithful, deliverance is near, obedience must be seen, be an unconditional blessing as He continues to bless you. This time is short, serve Him well, serving all. Without exception. Fleeing ? Know ? Yes ? ? .
Meow? . GB!
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10/12/2008 6:34 pm |
Wow bring out the tissue May you continue to walk in God Grace Thank you for reading and GBY and your family!
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10/12/2008 6:37 pm |
AAAAHHHH! You will make some lucky filly, a mighty sweet, gently passionate prince indeed!!!! Thank you for sharing your beautiful, intimate poems, that have such warmth, and allows us a glimpse into the soul of a real man! Blessings, My Dear! GB!
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10/12/2008 6:47 pm |
You'll meet her soon Michael, you're young, plenty of time and no wrinkles looming Well nope, not too many wrinkles yet...but sometimes in the morning I feel like I'm walking beyond the grave! Lol...yikes!GBY, and thank you kind sister!
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10/12/2008 6:51 pm |
Both were beautiful. I did like the Girl without a Name better. You said they are more songs that poems. I think the Over and Over is more of a song. Have a great Sunday, sabrefire. Blessings. Yeah, they are not what I would usually write as poetry I suppose, and I kind of had a beat in my head when I wrote them, so I'd say 'songish.' Lol. Thank you for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed them! Have a blessed day yourself! GB!
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10/12/2008 7:09 pm |
Mike those were amazing! I can't pick which one i like better; they were both great God will lead her to you, just have faith. GBY! Tracey And yes, I'll have faith, this I know! "Thy merciful kindness be for my comfort..." Psalm 119. GBY GQ and thanks for reading dear!!! Have a blessed day!
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10/13/2008 10:31 am |
I'm a bad blog subscriber. I only read the first one. Okay, I will scroll back up and read the second. You will have your happy ending, I just have a feeling about you. Some girl is going to waltz in and knock you off your feet and vice versa. Just don't let a girl think she can walk all over you (kindness for stupidity and all that jazz). Nice guys tend to end up with the um... you know, it's a word that people say instead of female dogs. Still have my same old Schwinn GS Hybrid. It's functional, but not light. I have't ridden in awhile, I miss it. I'm off to scroll up now. TJ aka Gina
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10/13/2008 6:22 pm |
I'm a bad blog subscriber. I only read the first one. Okay, I will scroll back up and read the second. You will have your happy ending, I just have a feeling about you. Some girl is going to waltz in and knock you off your feet and vice versa. Just don't let a girl think she can walk all over you (kindness for stupidity and all that jazz). Nice guys tend to end up with the um... you know, it's a word that people say instead of female dogs. Still have my same old Schwinn GS Hybrid. It's functional, but not light. I have't ridden in awhile, I miss it. I'm off to scroll up now. TJ aka Gina You will have your happy ending, I just have a feeling about you. One of my female friends in 'real-life' said almost that very thing I remember. So, this is good! Just don't let a girl think she can walk all over you. Haha! Well I doubt that will hardly be a problem. It's actually a funny thought to me...lol. Well TJ I hope you get a chance to get out there, before the snow starts to blow! GBY and the family Sister, sabrefire
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