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8/4/2008 7:02 pm
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I wrote this last night, hope you enjoy friends. I adapted the old Roman saying of life consisting of "shadows and dust," a bit.
 Shadows and Dust
Sun streaked fields of amber wheat and rye each ye yields- more precious than I. Through labors in dust and toiled strife comes a sweaty browed and blistered life. With wind swept plains of golden grains -from birth thy scent of heaven wanes- she waxes with servitude and iron wrought yoked with oxen- but one, be cursed with thought!
By what shall then a man number his years- sweltering days, lunar floods, or jars of tears when all thy wicked kin, be dead in sin what hath I but to again- walk therein- as beast of burden reviled in dust- and consume away my days with unslaked lust?
Rocking rye and furrowed crops of gold thy beast who tills, lives as a tale foretold- like bullworks under Pharaoh's whips of old following commands of men- they die to uphold. For a mother in travail- should we weep and mourn for the little one's into this wickedness borne! Hear! O' ye cry for Lady Wisdom- all whom believe know ye well how sore she grieves! For even if she springs up as a desert rose her life be laden and riddled with woes!
O' you sun streaked fields of amber wheat and rye yes, what each ye yields- thought, more precious than I! For I have naught to offer but perhaps to inspire- for my spirit refuses to work of Pharaoh's hire! But all ye beasts of burden, hath but to inquire 'seek ye first,' then shalt thou acquire- For this- it's written, be the Lord's desire. For ye shiny plowshares and shackles He can bust it is your souls- then, that be covered in rust! Yes, work and toil therein- you must... to become ye more- than but shadows and dust...
...shadows and dust.
Gb, sabrefire
Copyright MAS 2008
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1542 posts 8/4/2008 8:12 pm |
Awesome!!! God Bless this wonderful talent you have
Yahweh is my light and salvation.  
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919 posts 8/4/2008 10:33 pm |
Amen brother. Why toil so much for the riches of this earth and desire it's gold, and loose our souls?
Awesome poem. May God richly bless you more, so that you can share with us these inspiring verses.
Josh
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1764 posts 8/4/2008 11:34 pm |
Wonderful poem, yes you are very talented. God bless!
Seek ye first the kingdom of God, and His righteousness!
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22248 posts 8/5/2008 12:35 am |
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. Continue to be faithful, deliverance is near, obedience must be seen, be an unconditional blessing as He continues to bless you.
This time is short, serve Him well, serving all.
Without exception.
Know?
Yes?
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Meow ?
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For me to live is Christ and to die is gain.
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1550 posts 8/5/2008 7:14 pm |
Quoting tkay2: Awesome!!! God Bless this wonderful talent you have
Thank You TK...yes! He is a Wonderful Lord that we serve indeed! Gby2! sabrefire
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1550 posts 8/5/2008 7:15 pm |
Quoting alyosha2: Amen brother. Why toil so much for the riches of this earth and desire it's gold, and loose our souls?
Awesome poem. May God richly bless you more, so that you can share with us these inspiring verses.
Josh
Thanks brother...very well stated. It is true that we are not here for Pharaoh's hire. May you be blessed! "Did you not know that I would be about My Father's business?"
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1550 posts 8/5/2008 7:16 pm |
Quoting Godschildtoo: Wonderful poem, yes you are very talented. God bless!
Thank you Sister and nice to see you again! Gby abundantly! sabrefire
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1550 posts 8/5/2008 7:17 pm |
Quoting meow33744:
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. Continue to be faithful, deliverance is near, obedience must be seen, be an unconditional blessing as He continues to bless you.
This time is short, serve Him well, serving all.
Without exception.
Know?
Yes?
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Meow ?
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And a tip of the cat, er cap, to ya, Pete. Gb!
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1075 posts 8/5/2008 7:53 pm |
"For even if she springs up as a desert rose her life be laden and riddled with woes!"
rose of sharon= desert rose
...seems to be the story of my life
"know ye well how sore she grieves!"
life is crazy and so unfair, but really who cares? hey, but that's ok... these things too shall pass- "ashes to ashes... dust to dust"
God's love reaches all- growing means thinking outside the box... love one another
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1075 posts 8/5/2008 8:07 pm |
just curious... did you happen to see this? YOU KNOW WHO YOU ARE...
God's love reaches all- growing means thinking outside the box... love one another
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1254 posts 8/6/2008 2:11 pm |
Hey Sabre! You are very talented. You inspired me to put one of my few poems on BC. I even had it all put in last Sat., on my friend's laptop, but tried to make it bold and deleted it all. I was already pressed for time by then, so I just left. But, I will bring it and blog it, soon. With my boss out of town most the summer, I have been pretty busy. Anyway, keep penning, you are good at it.
TJ
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1550 posts 8/6/2008 7:00 pm |
Quoting skystar13: "For even if she springs up as a desert rose her life be laden and riddled with woes!"
rose of sharon= desert rose
...seems to be the story of my life
"know ye well how sore she grieves!"
life is crazy and so unfair, but really who cares? hey, but that's ok... these things too shall pass- "ashes to ashes... dust to dust"
Ah the Rose of Sharon...Song of Solomon...Song of Sky. Yes it is true all of these things will no doubt pass. Living as an "owl in the desert"? Owls are not supposed to be in the desert...but we are like them... GBY!
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1550 posts 8/6/2008 7:01 pm |
No I had not seen that! He souds like quite a fella!! Gb, sabrefire
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1550 posts 8/6/2008 7:02 pm |
No I had not seen that! He sounds like quite a fella!! Gb, sabrefire
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1550 posts 8/6/2008 7:05 pm |
Quoting thanksjesus: Hey Sabre! You are very talented. You inspired me to put one of my few poems on BC. I even had it all put in last Sat., on my friend's laptop, but tried to make it bold and deleted it all. I was already pressed for time by then, so I just left. But, I will bring it and blog it, soon. With my boss out of town most the summer, I have been pretty busy. Anyway, keep penning, you are good at it.
TJ
Heya TJ! Bummer about the snafu. I'm very glad however to hear that you're going to share! But anyways, thanks a lot and nice to see you step away from your busy life for a second to share with us... GBY! sabrefire
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1550 posts 8/6/2008 7:15 pm |
Quoting thanksjesus: Hey Sabre! You are very talented. You inspired me to put one of my few poems on BC. I even had it all put in last Sat., on my friend's laptop, but tried to make it bold and deleted it all. I was already pressed for time by then, so I just left. But, I will bring it and blog it, soon. With my boss out of town most the summer, I have been pretty busy. Anyway, keep penning, you are good at it.
TJ
Oh yeah, and when ever I see your screen name I sing in my head that line from the Jars of Clay song..."She thanks The Jesus for the daisies and the roses...someday she'll understand, the meaning of it all."
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876 posts 8/6/2008 8:53 pm |
Another poetic work of art...miss your words...shades and a glimps into the soul. I'll be back after school starts...Linkin Park with my kids Saturday! Kids Rock!!! God Bless...Poetic Versifier...I am praying for you.
Truth is Black and White Paula Marie
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1254 posts 8/7/2008 10:54 am |
Quoting sabrefire45: Oh yeah, and when ever I see your screen name I sing in my head that line from the Jars of Clay song..."She thanks The Jesus for the daisies and the roses...someday she'll understand, the meaning of it all."
Awh... that's sweet. I wish I would have capitalized the J in Jesus, but... When I was thinking of a name, I said to myself, I want Jesus to be exalted every time people see me on here.
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8/9/2008 7:47 pm |
Wonderful words of great wisdom. Let all we do be for His glory unless we say when the day is done....I did it all for nought.
Continue, continue, continue....your gift of words to bless all those who read it...to expound, to lift up, to convict, to delight....continue, continue, continue.
Hugs, Beth
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2418 posts 8/12/2008 1:33 pm |
I think you outa give up your chauffering job and write a book Gawjus, just gawjus 
Luv is patient, kind, unselfish, hopes 4 the best...
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1550 posts 8/14/2008 5:59 pm |
Quoting imadeit3: Another poetic work of art...miss your words...shades and a glimps into the soul. I'll be back after school starts...Linkin Park with my kids Saturday! Kids Rock!!! God Bless...Poetic Versifier...I am praying for you.
Paula! Nice to see you! I hope that your summer is going well. Good luck at the concert sounds like you'll have quite a time! Thanks and see you soon then... Gb, sabrefire
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1550 posts 8/14/2008 6:47 pm |
Quoting thanksjesus: Awh... that's sweet. I wish I would have capitalized the J in Jesus, but... When I was thinking of a name, I said to myself, I want Jesus to be exalted every time people see me on here.
Love the new pic!! GB!
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1550 posts 8/14/2008 6:48 pm |
Quoting quietwalker: Wonderful words of great wisdom. Let all we do be for His glory unless we say when the day is done....I did it all for nought.
Continue, continue, continue....your gift of words to bless all those who read it...to expound, to lift up, to convict, to delight....continue, continue, continue.
Hugs, Beth
Well how nice to see you Beth! Thanks for the encouragement. I hope to continue for as long as He might have me to. Thank you again sweet lady and GBY! sabrefire
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1550 posts 8/14/2008 6:51 pm |
Awwwww...thanks dear. So glad you enjoyed it Sister. I'd love to quit workin for Yendor's Ponytail Express...but I'm afraid The Sir rules with an iron ponytail... GB!
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876 posts 8/15/2008 8:27 pm |
The concert was great! Hey, if you get a chance check out the band Alexisonfire on youtube. Watch the video for the song "This could be anywhere in the world". Lyrics below...
This town has its claws Buried in my neck This town it takes lives Without mercy Without hate
The streets are in distress The sun sufficates behind darkened skies
The grass is growing On top of my feet I'm sinking Won't be long Before i'm too deep too run
The line up seems endless Underneath the salvation signs
We are the dead ones We are the lost cause We are the bend before the break Our steps seal our fate
Because this city, this city is haunted By ghosts from broken homes This city, this city is haunted And there's no hope left for these souls
Every step i take I leave a small piece of myself behind Soon there will be nothing left
The cracks in the pavement Match the cracks in their weathered skin
The sky's a brick wall The ground's a juggernaut Each day they get a bit closer Between them, i am caught
As i stare in amazement i can't believe This is where i live
Every breath i take I feel my lungs seal this breeze feels more like shards of glass I'm more scars than skin
Because this city, this city is haunted By ghosts from broken homes This city, this city is haunted And there's no hope left for these souls
Our steps seal fate [x2]
This is our celebration Come join the lost souls [x2]
This city, this city is haunted
Walk with us now
Because this city, this city is haunted By ghosts from broken homes This city, this city is haunted And there's no hope left for these souls
Truth is Black and White Paula Marie
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1550 posts 8/18/2008 11:31 am |
Quoting imadeit3: The concert was great! Hey, if you get a chance check out the band Alexisonfire on youtube. Watch the video for the song "This could be anywhere in the world". Lyrics below...
This town has its claws Buried in my neck This town it takes lives Without mercy Without hate
The streets are in distress The sun sufficates behind darkened skies
The grass is growing On top of my feet I'm sinking Won't be long Before i'm too deep too run
The line up seems endless Underneath the salvation signs
We are the dead ones We are the lost cause We are the bend before the break Our steps seal our fate
Because this city, this city is haunted By ghosts from broken homes This city, this city is haunted And there's no hope left for these souls
Every step i take I leave a small piece of myself behind Soon there will be nothing left
The cracks in the pavement Match the cracks in their weathered skin
The sky's a brick wall The ground's a juggernaut Each day they get a bit closer Between them, i am caught
As i stare in amazement i can't believe This is where i live
Every breath i take I feel my lungs seal this breeze feels more like shards of glass I'm more scars than skin
Because this city, this city is haunted By ghosts from broken homes This city, this city is haunted And there's no hope left for these souls
Our steps seal fate [x2]
This is our celebration Come join the lost souls [x2]
This city, this city is haunted
Walk with us now
Because this city, this city is haunted By ghosts from broken homes This city, this city is haunted And there's no hope left for these souls
Wow...great lyrics! I'll check them out! Glad you had fun... It reminds me of something...not sure what...hmmmm...I'll have to think about it... GB!
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